Feedback from other members of the class

Editing-
Editing was good but photos need to be smoother and faster. More transitions could be good. Copyrighted images?

Camera work-
Nice bath scene, still camera good

Sound- Will look good with non diagetic sound for bath and scribbling faces bit. Maybe volcanoes would be effective.

Mise en scene-
Spooky scene, snapshots of blood builds tension, darkness effective, view from outside increases sense of being watched.

Narrative-
Fairly obvious whats happening. It is clear but not sure whether he wants to rape or kill her.

Generic conventions-
The "gaze" plus voyarism, stalking, murder, threat, contrasting setting, ordinary setting.