Response to feedback

Editing-
Only very rough idea of whats to come, just order. The photos will be flashed up quicker with transitions making then smoother and faster, and they aren't copyrighted images as stacey took and edited them. Final footage will involve transitions as rough cut has none at all.

Camera work- thank you :) we had to re-shoot the bath scene several times to get it still

Sound- Plan on leaving the sound of the taps dripping like you said, and also will considering the noise of faces being scribbled out. Hopefully we will create our own soundtrack

Mise en scene- we intended the snapshots of blood to build tension and add mystery so thank you!

Narrative- the story would be revealed more in the film as to whether she was raped or killed

Generic convensions- we planned to use all of the ones mentioned =)